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crackednotbroken
Identity Crisis
United States, Texas

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Lost Perception

Like so many
Try to find it
Lost perception
Abandoned in time

No matter
cause and reason
Perception
Always there to tease us

Only after bitter swallow
Hurt feelings selfishly borrow
Perception
Once known only as
Beauty and wisdom

Anger twists and teases
cause and reason
Lost perceptions
Forgotten in time

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dox Comment by: dox - 2007-05-14 12:09
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I like the topic.
A lot of meaning in such few word melody.
very nice.
melody2007w Comment by: melody2007w - 2007-05-09 04:35
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we have some very talented ..writers at thisforum..hm...nice touch ..Ilikeit very eloquent..will you make comments on my poem..CANYOU SEE THE TEARDROPS DANCING AROUND MY EYES;;Thanks..
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