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proliterati
moses abukutsa
Kenya, n/a, bunyore

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I want to wonder

I want to wonder
in my dreams
i want
i want to strum the tunes of my guitar
i want you at my bossom listening to my guitar
i want to wonder
i want to weep
and wallow in ecstacy
when i want
i want just to want
to hear the music of chirping birds
i want nature not the noisy city
i want the countryside
when we watch me and you and the sun set
the moon rise and the countryside sleep
i just want to wonder in this beauty of oldfashioned country
i want to want to wonder
but the politics of modernity make me wonder.

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proliterati Comment by: proliterati - 2007-08-10 01:34
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THANKS SILENT AND WELCOME MAN!
silent Comment by: silent - 2007-08-06 13:44
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Nice verse if only we could wonder in peace
proliterati Comment by: proliterati - 2007-06-01 01:37
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thanks JPM
JPM Comment by: JPM - 2007-05-31 00:24
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Well done there. we all want and want only find that we wonder why? i feel you were at a space when you wrote this peace.
proliterati Comment by: proliterati - 2007-05-10 07:53
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great ellkoggle, take in every comment and each of your opnion is mportant for my career,in fact most poetry lovers are not necessarily poetry experts,by the way i hal from a town west of Kenya called Kakamega and i once lived in Narobi our Kenyan capital city and all the hustle and noise for real is not peaceful like the countryside.I get a lot of inspiration from nature anyway.
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