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CharredQuill
C. White
Australia, Victoria, Warrnambool

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Wake, Navy, Wake.

This is a song inspired from a tune called "The Pirate Song." It can be found at the following site, so you can listen to it in the background while you read this.

http://www.contemplator.com/sea/pirate.html


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My home is the sea, the shores far and near,
They call me a pirate; a true buccaneer.
The wind's in our sails, and the anchor's aweigh
At the top of the main mast, our black flag displayed.


So wake, Navy wake, I am waiting for thee,
Oh, this night or never, shipwrecked thou shalt be,
So wake, Navy wake, I am waiting for thee,
Oh, this night or never, shipwrecked thou shalt be.


Surrender your ship, and your coin purses too,
I'll give you no quarter, as landlubbers do.
My voice is as hazy, as a gunpowder blast,
But sadly that voice, is the one you'll hear last.


So wake, Navy wake, I am waiting for thee,
Oh, this night or never, shipwrecked thou shalt be,
So wake, Navy wake, I am waiting for thee,
Oh, this night or never, shipwrecked thou shalt be.


The Frenchman and Don will cower in fear,
And the English turn tail, when our corvette draws near.
Our purses are full, and our hearts merrily sing,
As the clouds gather on, the storm petrel's wing.


So wake, Navy wake, I am waiting for thee,
Oh, this night or never, shipwrecked thou shalt be,
So wake, Navy wake, I am waiting for thee,
Oh, this night or never, shipwrecked thou shalt be.


A buccaneer's life, is the life I shall lead,
And a warning I'll give, for the Crown to take heed.
I'm simply a pirate, but your reign shall not last,
Till the black flag by inches, is torn from the mast.


So wake, Navy wake, I am waiting for thee,
Oh, this night or never, shipwrecked thou shalt be,
So wake, Navy wake, I am waiting for thee,
Oh, this night or never, shipwrecked thou shalt be.

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Informal Grae Comment by: Informal Grae - 2007-05-15 06:23
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I will hold comment on the full power of this piece until I have learnt the fine art of reading and listening to music at the same time. Then when that's done I'll be back.

I did enjoy it as a solo piece, though! Grae.
crystalrose Comment by: crystalrose - 2007-05-10 09:00
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i like it.
Kendall20 Comment by: Kendall20 - 2007-05-10 06:32
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I can totally see this being in a musical. I don't know if that will offend you, it shouldnt, but some people don't like musicals. I am not one of those people. I can see the stage and everything. Half-light, lots of ale and wenches, a rollicking good time. I thought the rhyme and meter were practically (almost insanely) flawless. I really enjoyed the refrain "Wake, Navy wake" because I always like to know who is being pillaged and it adds another dimension to the poem than if the pirates were just singing about how awesome they are. It's like the music in Jaws. You know the shark is coming, makes it more suspenseful than just seeing the fin. Good Job. I'm sure my awesome limerick totally inspired this!
CharredQuill Comment by: CharredQuill - 2007-05-10 05:55
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Pirates were pirates. They sailed under no crown, be it English, Spanish, French or otherwise. You are talking about the privateers, who were the legalised pirates. They were the ones with the Letter of Marque which allowed them to plunder the ships of the enemies of the crown.

And no, I haven't. I've never even heard of Leonard Cohen.
GalileoGalilei77 Comment by: GalileoGalilei77 - 2007-05-10 05:52
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Though in the pages of real life history, the pirates had done the queens bidding, and as well were the slave runners for america. Still, without that detail and taken back to what most perceive, it transforms to a very good metaphore that begs the reader to draw his specific arena in wich to paste its meaning. I'm sure you have heard "democracy is coming to the USA" by Leonard Cohen. It has a similar ring. Very Nice.
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