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hulshizer
Ronald Hulshizer
United States, Nebraska, Lavista

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Poles Apart

Ever contemplate the
layers of profanity
in every day life?

A man saying,
get your black
ass out of here!
may be construed
as threatening,
while a woman
saying, I have
to get my black
ass out of here!
merely sounds
self-deprecating.

His saying, Fuck You!
is not quite on par
with his paramour
saying, Fuck Me!
is it?

Same words,
different touchstones.

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Johndeprey Comment by: Johndeprey - 2007-11-24 04:44
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Highly amusing! Funny but true. Nicely put. My wife hates obscentiy, anything "smutty". But her favourate joke is: How do you know elephants have their sexual organs on their feet? - Because if they tread on you, you're fucked!" Whenever I repeat this joke to her she rocks with laughter! So within the absurdity of the joke "fuck" is OK, but in the context of what I feel about why it might not be sensible to eat another apple crumble, it's a no no..
jonsonkuhn Comment by: jonsonkuhn - 2007-10-12 18:14
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Yes! This was great. You're tackling a subject I find terribly fascinating and have always pondered myself - so I related to this quite a bit. Very clever and fun to read - thank you for sharing it. Take care.
TaylorB Comment by: TaylorB - 2007-10-10 19:29
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cliche but nonetheless truthful.
Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2007-08-27 08:01
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Hmmm... interesting. Not that glass-bustin'. That is, until the last line where I begin to think you are reaching behind the reaching behind.
Fouchega Comment by: Fouchega - 2007-08-05 21:45
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An enjoyable, thought-provoking read, Ron. I like the way you've expressed your thoughts here. It's always interesting to me how the same words expressed differently can have various shades of meaning.
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