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Comment by: manoj - 2007-05-31 19:16
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| short, crisp and to the point...... |
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I like the simplicity of this piece because it fits with the subject matter. When you are suffering a migraine, you don't want to "go on." *winks* Get it out as quickly as possible with the least amount of talking.
Nicely done,
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| please expand on this work. it is a very good opening that begs further exploration. please do go on...you definitely have my ear. |
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I like what you have here, but I think you could go further. As a migraine sufferer myself I can definitely appreciate "blinding light" "deafening sound" but maybe explore those things more.
Just suggestions though, feel free to ignore them.
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