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jaysinp183
Jason Hardy
United States, Maryland, Baltimore

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The ultimate Sin

Forget about all the good things you hear.
Forget that the person used to be near.
Because now you will never feel whole,
Because that person broke your soul.
Your heart wasn't enough for them.
They wanted the ultimate sin.
They wanted you ripped apart.
And they decided to start with your heart.
You gave in with one last breath,
And it's you alone that is left
But now your soul is in tatters.
Your heart fell to the floor in a splatter.
Never open up, never give in,
For love is the ultimate sin.

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CowgirlSerenity Comment by: CowgirlSerenity - 2008-01-07 19:16
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Wow wonderfully written....Love can sometimes be the ultimate sin, which is why a lot of people avoid it at all cost...
GreenIce Comment by: GreenIce - 2007-06-05 21:45
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Wow....Love IS the ultimate sin....This poem is so very lovely..and dark...I reply mostly because this poem....is me....terrifying...how well you captured that truth..
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