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Silver Blood
Silver Blood
United States, Kansas, Hutchinson

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Your'e invited

Early morning travesties
From Evening tapestries
Together tonight gathers a court
Of a most horrid deadly sort

You're cordially invited
To a dance of the most powerful
And are next to be sighted
As a deity of the sorrowful

So now pick a mask
The time is right
Or would you rather pick a casket
In which to sleep tonight

You enter as a blackened fox
Among the creatures of sin
It's a battle you cannot win
These animals, controllers of human whims

A mistress as a cat
The master is a rat
And their sun a flitting bat

The butler wears a suit
Made of snake skin
And their maid hair pins
Made of a fish's fins

The walls are splashed with blood
Drying to the color of mud
And concubines sing of key
To a hideous melody

Yes it is a ball fit for a king
Of most traitorous and deadly deeds
So gather around the table
It's like some tragic fable

Then you all take your seats
To play a new game and be sure you cheat
To begin the games true right
The white rat asks in a tone of deceit
So who shall die tonight?

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Comment by: - 2007-05-17 09:19
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Deidre (I am trying to call you that lately instead of DeeDee, so you don't shoot me :) ),
this is an awesome poem. It really made me think, and i love it.
by the way....where have you been lately? are you still "sick" with another fatal illness?
MaRiAh EsTeP Comment by: MaRiAh EsTeP - 2007-05-14 08:27
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nice story. it's not only poetry but it also tells a story also. good job.
xemoxangelx Comment by: xemoxangelx - 2007-05-14 08:18
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interesting piece i think you have used the ryhme well as you hav used so much rhyme yet it does not seem over the top.nice imagery
GalileoGalilei77 Comment by: GalileoGalilei77 - 2007-05-14 08:10
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Cant see what the end intent of it is, however, maybe my perception is to feeblistic in this matter. I do like the story in its face value though, it takes life in your thought. Sprouting like a play or the classical horror- Dracula films perhaps.
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