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PANeufeldt
Paul Neufeldt
United States, OR, Portland

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Recycle Me

Filling
Fizzing
Fuzzing
Fun!

Burning coldly held in tongue
Cooling from the hottest sun
Hear my praise on T.V. sung
But in the end it matters none
My empty bottle without care...flung

(P.A.Neufeldt c. 2007)

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Comment by: - 2007-05-15 03:51
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good work ... Has a nice flow and strong finishing line...
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