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LadyMeka24
Tomeka Wilbourn
United States, CA, Sylmar

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A Troubled Heart

A troubled heart I am tonight, my emotions are high and seeable my many. My heartaches in need of comfort, yet comfort doesn't show its face. I am left in a moment of despair and sadness. How am I to rise from my present slumber? Not often do I find myself here, but presently this is me. My life seems filled with several worlds of need, my members are torn from one direction to another, and my one mind is having a tough time reaching each member. Today I was angry, someone really pissed on my already raw emotions, the throw was hard, and now I am just here, sitting here with a heavy heart. When will these times pass, I need them to pass and let their hold on me go. Looking at the calendar I know in a few weeks this will be done and gone, but right now, I am like a wounded child in the middle of the world screaming, yet no one hears me'¦

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MaryannWebb Comment by: MaryannWebb - 2007-06-04 05:29
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I have a theory about sadness.. it's as if it's the way the universe lets us know there is something we are not doing that we should be, or want to be.. with out it we would not understand the joys of happiness, and we would never step out of our comfort zone to learn more about ourselves. Your piece struck a chord in me, made me think of what it's like to feel this way.
GrkGrl Comment by: GrkGrl - 2007-05-20 08:37
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"comfort doesn't show it's face"...very nice
once again i have to comment on the structure...and how i hate the thought of someone missing out on your talent because of it
i liked this piece...it's something we can all relate to at one time or another...the way you describe it is very warm and real...nice job...gg
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