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Grounded Vertigo
Michelle Penny
United Kingdom

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I miss you

I miss you

Miss the feeling I get when it's all over

Miss wondering what others will think of us

Miss the hours we spend working together

Miss how you fill the page

Miss you

Come back to me soon.

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BrindleyHD Comment by: BrindleyHD - 2007-09-14 11:31
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The simplicity of this catches like brushing against a raw wound.
colindardis Comment by: colindardis - 2007-08-06 09:57
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A previous comment mentioned a lost muse, and this is the angle I picked up on. Seems to almost be a writer speaking to her art, words that yearn to be filled in with a greater meaning or expression.
uqbahTC1 Comment by: uqbahTC1 - 2007-06-27 17:21
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Very very heartwarming..
tcbswan Comment by: tcbswan - 2007-05-31 13:14
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nice piece--speaking to that inner-scribe--asking her
to come back! thanks for posting~
t.
passion8poetress Comment by: passion8poetress - 2007-05-23 15:24
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I agree with the comment by simowierdo...it's not complicated yet relatable. It's something we all experience and you managed to sum it up flawlessly. Thank you for sharing.
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