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Your Mommy is an Angel <3
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You've been through hell
An angel you are
A broken shell
An unhealed Scar
Keep your head up high
And don't fall apart at the seems
Keep your mother in your heart
And heaven in your dreams
I hope you see her smile
Showing through the clouds
It's you that she is smiling about
She seems so very proud
Proud of just how strong you've been
Over the past few years
Proud your not hiding yourself
Behind four walls and
Drowning yourself in tears
She's also proud of your sister
And the women she's become
Tears of joy stroll down her face
And a choir of angels begin to hum
She explains to you
That the time had come
For her to take her life
But everything is better now
And god stands by her side
Your time will come someday too
But you won't feel any pain
You will live much longer
Until your old and grey
With arms wide open
In heaven she waits
To reunite with you someday
She knows that your future
Is really bright
And that you'll live
A successful life
She loves to watch you grow
Each and every day
And when she stands
By your side
There's a smile on your face
Your mommy is an angel
From heaven up above
And whenever it is raining
She's showering you with love <3
5/14/07
By: Amie Mickle
This one is for my lovely Terra-Bear. I love you!
From the Moo to the cowie!!!
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Maybe...'don't come unseamed'
You need a little rewording to make the flow better, if that is the reason you posted on the forum. It's a great piece...seriously, just get that flow you and I know you are capable of in this piece. I know a couple of song writers, garage bands..high school kids. They might be interested in seeing some of your work. We'll have to talk about that, you can email me.
Once again.........KEEP IT UP.
