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Bonnie Florea
United States, Oh, Blanchester

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Forbidden Sin

A knight's armor lay on the floor.


A lady's silks lay with them.


A sigh is heard. A slight moan.


As lovers dance in rhythm.


Soft whispers spoke, upon sweet ears.


Love is promised, love is here.


A blast of wind as shutter's crash.


The husband is home and the knight must dash.


Forbidden touch, forbidden love.


Their sin is revealed.


Its blades and blood that pour on to the floor.


where clothes lay discarded.


A cry is heard,


A scream that shatters.


Love and lovers die together.


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quilterofwords Comment by: quilterofwords - 2007-08-02 05:53
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So it is your position, that the piece was without honesty, in its sexual tension?
michael Comment by: michael - 2007-08-02 04:46
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I just think that erotic love poetry is very difficult to get right....i.e. to write it and be honest in doing so....the tension is part of the poem, but it is also the truth that is ever disguised by masking your sexual desires with words!
quilterofwords Comment by: quilterofwords - 2007-08-02 04:41
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michael, is that a good or bad thing, by stating one word "Filthy"?
michael Comment by: michael - 2007-08-02 04:36
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Filthy!
Moonblade115 Comment by: Moonblade115 - 2007-07-11 09:21
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Its romantic and bloody at the same time. Its good
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