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MaRiAh EsTeP
mariah estep
United States, kansas, nickerson

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i am merely a shadow

my sister and my best friend said this...

i am not a person, i am merely a shadow of a curse, and the sun is people. they make me grow dimmer and then darker then dimmer again. and the object is a curse that stomps and distorts me until i am no more.

for my twin sister, mercedes.

i love you, sis.

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Thunderpen Comment by: Thunderpen - 2007-09-10 23:07
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... a fine pic of the sharing that can take place between two who care for one another. Fine, direct, caring...
Comment by: - 2007-07-06 17:22
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There is someting very sweet and reassuring about this piece. I like the way you keep it very simple and to the point.
juliet01 Comment by: juliet01 - 2007-05-17 07:57
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lol sweet ;)
MaRiAh EsTeP Comment by: MaRiAh EsTeP - 2007-05-17 07:50
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that's my point. :)
juliet01 Comment by: juliet01 - 2007-05-17 07:48
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woot woot i love u to hun..thnx ever so much...maybe now people will understand how i feel!
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