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Emily03Erickson
Emily Erickson
United States, Wisconsin, Westby

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Wonder

I wonder what you think,
I wonder what you feel,
I wonder if you care,
Or if my heart will heal,
I wonder what your wonder,
I wonder who you are,
I wonder if you love me,
Or will you leave me with a scar,
I wonder what its like,
To be held in your arms,
I wonder what its like,
To be charmed with your charm,
I wonder if you love me,
Or if its even true,
That I wonder what I wonder,
Or if I'm in love with you.

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LAB Comment by: LAB - 2007-05-19 15:50
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I added this to my bookshelf, first thing I ever added....you rock darlin'.
LAB Comment by: LAB - 2007-05-19 15:49
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Just gramatical...'I wonder what your wonder', should that be..'I wonder what you wonder' Also...'I wonder what its like...your its needs a ', like it's. Big smile here, I love love love it!
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