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Desperate bitterness
Waves encircling for eternity
Entrancing mythology
You have been
No Longer Remaining.
Smoldering Ashes
You have Become
Remaining Forever.
A part of my memory
Forever intertwined
A part of my being
Forever Absent.
Entrancing mythology
A myth for the breaking
You have proven the myth
Not worth believing
Absent from Reality.
Mythology can remain
Time will reveal
No longer intertwined
Ashes to the wind
Softened Bitterness
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I read this a few times before appreciating it, but I do like it. I'd like to know where this came from, however, how you developed its meaning and the inspiration..
