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Silver Blood
Silver Blood
United States, Kansas, Hutchinson

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When darkness fell for light

I'm here I'm here
It says again
Don't fear don't fear
I'm here again

It's been so long
My sweet flower
How wrong, how wrong
Is this power

My demon says the maiden
If I where afraid then
I would have run and hide
Instead I said goodbye

But you do not know
What it is you seek
We never get a moments sleep
Says the demon from the deep

Ah yes a moments rest or peace
Is something I don't deserve for I reek
Of hidden rhymes and tears I weeped
Waiting again for power from your keep

And if I think you maiden
Use this power to abuse
And my darkness still refuse
It's you of this I accuse

Then you know dark demon
I shall soon be leaving
And take from you I will
My power you shall not kill

And try to kill I wont
Hate you'¦ I still don't
And why you wish to know
I wont explain just go

I was darkness you where light
But somewhere along the line
I think we switched our plights

Darkness to die for light
Until it becomes bright
Light turned to darkness
When it began to fight.

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Makotokugi Comment by: Makotokugi - 2007-10-28 10:55
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I was moved from "I'm here I'm here"

Thank You For This...

M~
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MaRiAh EsTeP Comment by: MaRiAh EsTeP - 2007-05-19 14:20
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you write like a professional. it's a great write.
xemoxangelx Comment by: xemoxangelx - 2007-05-19 06:07
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i like your use of rhyme,gives the poem a nice flow
brad19 Comment by: brad19 - 2007-05-19 02:32
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Great use of language and structure. All together a captivating piece.
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