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aceyorkmar
romar agbuya
Philippines

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A Grieving Child

Thank you mom, that you left me;

'Coz I've found out that I'm not important to you;

Thanks dad , that you take me for granted;

You are making me feel that you're vises are more important than my existence.


Thanks to both of you 'coz you're not making any sense;

You left me all alone and suffering;

Thank you that you are not now by my side;

because it makes me astrong person.


I also wanted to thank you that I'm parted to you;

Because I knew that i can do everything even if without you;

To stand on my own;

And to live eventhough I'M NOT WITH YOU.

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peterhattingh Comment by: peterhattingh - 2007-11-11 23:03
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I felt like this at times when I was young. Very honest and raw. I think it's very brave of you to post this Romar!

Thank you for sharing.

Peter
Dominika Comment by: Dominika - 2007-06-27 11:15
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Aw. The voice behind this is hard, cold, and yet small and raw at the same time. You really have a gift for bringing a raw, human element into your writing that can't be learned in a fancy school. You forgot a space between "a" and "strong" in the last line of the third stanza, but somehow that just makes me believe that you wrote this when a flood of emotion carried you through it. Heh, if that's not the truth, then at least it looks that way. :-) so Congratulations
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