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Tom
Tom Gant
United Kingdom

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Nagging Urge

Would it be so wrong, to
dig me up once I've gone?
Just to steal another glance
of the idle days we passed,
rather than lamenting over
countless dusty photographs.

Let the mind take the hand
and lead you to understanding.

Perhaps the thought of meeting
once again seems cheating?
Bury me deep then. Smother and cover me
deeper than all the times before,
but don't feign surprise to
find me strolling the surface of your mind.

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lilgoldenray Comment by: lilgoldenray - 2008-05-12 12:23
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Oh wow!!! This is amazing. Short and SWEET!!! Love the last line. and also "rather than lamenting over, countless dusty photographs". Thnx for the read...
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2008-01-07 11:32
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Perhaps the thought of meeting
once again seems cheating?

Awesome lines. Luv this.
bella25 Comment by: bella25 - 2007-12-17 19:42
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"But don't feign surprise...."

Stated so quietly but so powerful
patrickfinley Comment by: patrickfinley - 2007-12-05 04:23
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i really enjoyed this, its subtle use of rhyming, the variety in word choice adding a depth to the piece, the passion of it, and my ability to relate to the poem allowed me to really enjoy it, thank you.
Comment by: - 2007-11-26 04:01
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Nice work, because it evokes a response in your readers.
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