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yugohoshi
yugo hoshi
Japan, Tokyo

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Mourning the Death of a Flower

Am I a life, worth life and soul?
Treated with such care and affection;
yet sparks of stones, will devour me whole.
'Beauty so fragile,' and without protection.

I stand here, gazing, at what is forever,
in my final hour.
You walk by me, without ever
mourning the death of a flower.

You, you are a life.
And are conscious, yes,
of your own cares and strife.
Yet stronger than I, so it seems, nevertheless.

You rob from me the air,
and honey from the bees.
You steal from me ' without care '
the essence of what am me.

To be in peace, is all I ask,
and though you say you care,
through each of your daily tasks,
you poison me, unawares.

A 'Man' you label thee,
'The Grand of all that lives.'
With your eyes, you look down at me,
Ungrateful for what I give.

A 'superior species,'
your blood is warm, and red.
But though you may speculate 'humanity,'
It is this blood that you shed.

Your life is fragile as string!
and you treat me like a toy,
You create nothing!
only enemies,

Empires destroy, and are destroyed.
Without Tragedy
mourning the death of a flower.

I have observed you long
during the time I have spent here.
And though you won't know I am gone,
for you, I will shed a tear.

There were few that took the time, in these woods
to stop and smell my scent.
Yet there was not one who had stood
by me when I went.

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kamereon Comment by: kamereon Online- 2008-09-03 21:44
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solidly written with the use of profound language...this was a well thought out piece...great job
CelticCat Comment by: CelticCat - 2007-10-16 09:27
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A lovely ode to a flower. I only mourn them when they die in a vase in front of me, or if I accidentally behead one while passing...and yet, they bring me such joy with their beauty and frangrances. Perhaps I should be better to my flower friends. Lovely write, very inspiring!!
mafsa Comment by: mafsa - 2007-08-20 04:18
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this is a very wonderful send-off for a flower. very informal yet so unique!

And though you wonβ??t know I am gone,
for you, I will shed a tear.
>lovely,

Yet there was not one who had stood
by me when I went.
>so sad...

a naturalist and at the same time a poet,
thumbs up!
jenstarese Comment by: jenstarese - 2007-06-15 01:35
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Trading your love for hate...

For whatever reason that seems to fit. Your words dance, and I am here to witness their great performance and rise and clap.

Jennifer
TheSourMindofZPx Comment by: TheSourMindofZPx - 2007-05-31 15:55
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I'm amazed! These piece is powerful and emotional. For life to remain. We must appreciate nature and all its qualities. A flower is precious indeed and should be excepted for more than just a token of passion or caring people share. So much more i could say about the angles you touched. All and all it was fascinating. ZPx
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