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Sabreen
Sabreen Wolf
United States, GA, Cusseta

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Warmed by the Sun

The dream was afoot,
the skies blue and radiant.

Their love and desire,
untouched by tears.

They laugh happily,
warmed by the sun.

Each heart filling the other,
they feed on the delicious fruits.

Their dreams fulfilled,
they have found each other.

Two hearts beating as one,
their souls dance.

Forever in the ecstasy,
of each others arms.

They laugh happily,
warmed by the sun.

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poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza - 2007-11-29 22:53
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That is awsome seriously a whole story described in a few short verses that is seriously cool and it goes so good with that other poem amazing...
Sabreen Comment by: Sabreen - 2007-05-22 17:28
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Thank You Very Much Again! {:-D
You are Very Kind!
DarkInLightOut Comment by: DarkInLightOut - 2007-05-22 10:36
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this goes so well with your other poem till death do you apart. It's like you have two poems reflecting love... the downs and the ups. The hell and the heaven. I love the line "Two hearts beating as one, their souls dance" You're a very good writter.
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