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Comment by: sudipal - 2007-06-13 13:03
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| I like this poem. Beautifully delivered. The simplicity of the piece seems to parallel the simplicity of the thoughts and feelings of the narrator. |
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I'm a firm believer that short poems can be just as powerful, if not MORE powerful, than longer works. Wonderful work, Kate. It's short, concise and very eloquent.
D.K. |
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Comment by: mrsspark Online- 2007-05-23 13:30
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I reckon this is by far the best piece you've posted so far.
The staccato lines remind me of a poem by Prevert - 'dejeuner du matin,' I think - and conjure up the same agony of repressed emotion.
Bloody well done. Ada XX |
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| Thank you. It seems that sometimes a few words can say the most. |
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| I agree with Lance. I actually think its simplicity makes it more eloquent. |
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