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LBCGURL79
Vanessa Lopez
United States, Ca, Long Beach

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One Purpose

So full-filling, but yet not so much.
Erasure of the mind;
but a wishing for thy head to be blown away.
Gravity is immense, and the wind enters, releasing a euphoric state.
An invincible, mal-nutritioned product of chemical;
dumbfounded on hours at at time, floating around in another dimension.

The clock moves rapidly
and nothing followed.
Vampires in the night
with no intent of sleep.
Sunrise has no soul, merely a thing in the sky.
There's only one purpose;
one consistency.

Four days gone,
no siesta,
meals few and far and in between.
"Self-approved," I say!

The foolery hoards the display from my vision,
the figment of the imagination is hidden.

It has no pity
no shame,
brutually relentless.

But there's only one purpose;
only one consistency.

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bluefunk Comment by: bluefunk - 2007-06-22 05:15
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i think i know where you're coming from. to be numb and impervious to sunrise and sunset, revolving in a distant orbit of your own.. i don't know, is it the loneliness?
Comment by: - 2007-05-31 07:17
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good!!!
Jose Comment by: Jose - 2007-05-23 20:15
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Wow, I really like it... I wish I could write poetry like that personally... Always have probably always will.
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