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Life's Highway
I was driving down the highway, 80km in a 100k zone
Numbed by the inconvenience of life
'Why me'¯ stapled to my frown
When suddenly I realized I was going down alone
And everyone else was passing me by
How that is in life
I'm stuck, cannot go faster
Surely to slow would be to die
I'm driving down in 2nd gear
Everyone else just passing me by
I was out in the front for a while
'See ya later! I can't wait'¯, I would say
'You'd better get a move on'¯,
'I'm not hangin' round to play!'¯
I realized as I was driving
In 2nd gear down the road
That those to whom I'd spoken
Had overtaken and had grown
With kids and with husbands
With houses and jobs that stayed
With fame and with fortune
Their patience had obviously paid
In that moment I felt forgotten,
One more loss to add to the pain
It's not that I'm a bad person
It's just the choices that I've made
As I looked to the horizon
of the traffic that passed me by
I thought of times in rush hour
Where I'd had a cruisey ride
It was all quite simply choices
But not of wisdom,
Just of chance
Who knows which lane will open up,
And which one will come to a stand?
Who knows what lies around the bend?
To speed or slow us down
Who knows to whom we drive beside?
A friend may be found
As I was driving down the highway 80km in a 100k zone
I came to the realization, that I'm really not alone
No matter what the journey
And the detours along the way
There's only one destination
And on that GPS I'll stay!
©Jelly Bean 2007
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| i agree the ending is very suiting. It's a very good poem Jay, especially since I can relate to it. I really like how you compared the driving to the feeling of loneliness. Keep up the good work ^.^ you rule! I,,I, |
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Comment by: JayBean - 2007-05-29 05:28
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Thanks for your comments Michael Anthony
I'll reconsider the "Hiccups", which i think is a good point!
Regards Jay bean |
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| I like the ending. There is a sense in each of us that commands a rest or a reason for the fight, yet all the while the force that presses us on is always awair and nearly never overcame. I like the endurence your work expresses... (though the use of the word "huccups", unless you allude to it earlier in the piece, seems to break the medaphore of traviling down the highway. Great job! and I'm honored if something I wrote in any way inspired your expression. |
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