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frumpalump
The Frump
United States, PA

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look

her smile gleams
fair she seems
and still she's only
in my dreams

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2runaway Comment by: 2runaway - 2007-08-05 20:18
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This gave me a rush of happiness and then made me sad. But a happy sad, I just don't want it to be only a dream. I'm babbling, this was an amazing piece.
braintrashed Comment by: braintrashed - 2007-06-02 08:59
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This made my day.
MaryannWebb Comment by: MaryannWebb - 2007-05-28 09:40
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Great epigram! Well worded and precise, with a hint at the punch line in the second line with the use of the word 'seems'.
Jamilah Comment by: Jamilah - 2007-05-24 19:37
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So much said in so few words. This is sweet.
Katydidnt Comment by: Katydidnt - 2007-05-24 13:52
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Short, sweet, poignant. Expand on it possibly? A dream series?
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