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Industrialwaves
thomas quinn
United States, Oregon

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the girl smoking my pot.

Today a girl said
'You shouldn't talk about money'

'With you?'
I asked

'No with me; I don't care.'
She said

'Oh! Then with who?'
I asked

'Any one'
She told me

'Who's that?'
I asked again

Then she said
'I don't know'
It's just something you don't talk about'
Ya know?'

'Ya I know'
I replied

Then I told her
'But really its just paper
If I burn it, it's just ash.
If I spend it, it's just waste
And if I save it, it's just useless'

'So?'
She asked

'Pass the fag!'
I told her

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zepol Comment by: zepol - 2007-05-30 14:50
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ok, good one. yeah.
roy Comment by: roy - 2007-05-27 02:30
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funny...
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