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Forces of Nature - Diamante
Lunar
silvery, romantic
gleaming, glittering, shining
feminine, mysterious; masculine, powerful
burning, searing, glowing
bright, life-giving
Solar
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Comment by: dlynn - 2007-09-25 19:54
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Really nice choice of words, I like the buildup.
Very good. You should write more |
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| I like how it starts out with a soft description, then builds to something powerful. I don't know much about poetry as I'm a novelist, but I do know about creating images with words and you did a good job without having to say a lot, always a plus in any writing genre. |
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| I really love the way you've created a polar aspect with this diamante. The form is a particularly challenging one and by giving it this aspect of dark and light, night and day, moon and sun you've created an element that really reflects those differences beautifully. Very much enjoyed. :-) |
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| Well I'm not a poet so I can't say anything really helpful on this. I'll just say that it's really great and I love the way it flows from lunar to solar. |
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| OH!!!, what balance and unity. I love it. |
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