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brokenpencil
brokenpencil
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School - Palindrome

Home.
Feet running, bells ringing.
Children everywhere
are listening, learning, reading.
Breaktime comes soon.
Knowledge is important
and friendships are vital.
School.
Vital are frienships and
important is knowledge.
Soon comes breaktime.
"Reading, learning, listening are
everywhere, children."
Ringing bells, running feet.
Home.

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jyngrehl Comment by: jyngrehl - 2007-11-05 00:15
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Ha haha, that was awesome. I love palindromes, I wonder what do they call numeric palindromes? Anyway, great work... I am glad I read it!
brokenpencil Comment by: brokenpencil - 2007-10-28 05:56
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Thanks again for your comment. I was playing with the format so need to experiment still with the content.
SplinterOfChaos Comment by: SplinterOfChaos - 2007-10-27 15:47
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This doesn't really give me insight about school, but the format itself is very witty. Well done.
sudipal Comment by: sudipal - 2007-05-29 08:37
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Creative. Great poem, enjoyable to read.
xemoxangelx Comment by: xemoxangelx - 2007-05-14 08:50
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i think this poem works really well,nice peice
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