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daysleeper
JB abing
Philippines, somewhere, far-off

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just sometimes...

sometimes I'd like to
crush your thoughts
and throw them to a pit
or hide them somewhere far
so you won't go looking for them

sometimes I'd like to burn your dreams
so they become just ashes
and bury them in some
harsh-drenched ground
away from your reach

sometimes I'd like to see you submit
to life's atrocities
and bow to its control
over your adamant yearning
and hard-wearing guise

or maybe
just maybe

all I really just want
is to see you cry'¦.
just see you cry'¦..
and turn to me for strength'¦.

sometimes'¦.
even just sometimes'¦..

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William Comment by: William - 2008-01-16 09:50
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Very emotionally laden, like your other peices. Nice
SnDog1011 Comment by: SnDog1011 - 2007-07-26 00:29
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you are a
queen
nice piece
tiger Comment by: tiger - 2007-06-08 19:24
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Wow, that was sweeeeet. You can bury the ashes of my dreams any day. Ken
Comment by: - 2007-06-06 09:34
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so strong its intoxicating! I love it!
uglihed Comment by: uglihed - 2007-05-31 23:05
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Very powerful. I can relate with this piece very well.
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