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StephenShearer
Stephen Shearer
United States, Washington, Tacoma

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docking my sea of thought

my sea of thought
washes up from the bay
clustering drips drip drop on my paper
blank spaces filling from the tit
of my quill,
splashing out samples
of spoiled ink.

now swishing in and out
and around preposterious prepositions
and dependent clauses,
spilling here and there
as I add a dab of noun

the resonating verbs
are soon spilling their guts
with rhythm ... listen, do you hear?
the fluid formation of sound.

M's and N's are you humming?
sibilants, is that you hissing?
like baby snakes,
shivering to form ripples in the sand

drip, drip, I can hear
the consonants collecting
are they coming to dance with the vowels?
the vowels, those foolish emotional cons
regurgitating romance
to blend in with the tide,
have come to create undertow
beware lest they take you in!

it's ready to play now,
my orchastrated liquid
of verbal splash on parchment
word slander jamming,
poet slamming, against a tidal wave
of chords that rise and fall
at the end of each line.

perform for us now, my collection
entice us with a sample,
be it a sip or a drink,
spill upon us your slander
like a river
as you gushingly flow
off this page

drip
drip
drop
docking my sea of thought

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StephenShearer Comment by: StephenShearer - 2008-03-25 16:00
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Thanks Janet, Daysleeper, and ac7904. I must say, this was inspired by Valerie, my long-time editred friend: http://www.editred.com/Valerie. She's got some pretty clever stuff, too!
ParchmentPoetry Comment by: ParchmentPoetry - 2008-03-03 14:40
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Hi Stephen, It's been a while. Stopping by and found this and a few others. Nice work. You have a clever mind there little brother. Thanks for sharing. Janet
ac7904 Comment by: ac7904 - 2007-12-22 11:21
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I adore this. Wish I could hear it read out loud. Very witty, verbal play. It's also different, which is so refreshing. Personification of nature is one thing, but consonants and vowels? Terrific. And the subject of the poem does not get lost, the orchestration on paper mirroring the orchestration you perform in writing the piece.
daysleeper Comment by: daysleeper - 2007-05-26 19:54
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very creative indeed......
StephenShearer Comment by: StephenShearer - 2007-02-19 18:06
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... and as we convince ourselves of who we wish we were!
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