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STRYPT! Karjon's 100 word challenge.
"YEAH! WE ARE STRYPT! YOU GUYS ROCKED!"
The audience roared.
"WE BID YOU...GOODNI-I-I-TE..."
K-Rock grabbed the microphone and kicked the mike stand.
"...I trust we'll see some of you lovelies backstage..."
He cupped his crotch, threw his head-of-hair back; the rain of bras and panties increased.
STRYPT walked offstage; groupies (many topless) pushed in on them as they struggled through their dressing room door.
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"Yuck. One of them touched me...with her breast."
"Soap's over there. Wash yourself - you don't know where she's been."
"K-Rock, what'll we do until your mum comes to collect us?"
Kenneth Rochester shrugged. "Scrabble?"
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| Haha very amusing, and well written for such a short piece. Good job |
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Comment by: costa - 2007-06-04 06:09
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:P Thanks for reading, and getting a laugh out of it, Gareth and Ash.
Yep - I imagined a four piece band (Bass, Drum, Guitar, and Vocals) - one line for each member in the last bit. Hard to show, but it doesn't matter if it only sounds as though it's an exchange betweeen two people. Thanks for reading, MaryAnn.
Cheers
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haha can tell this was written by a male :P
thought the twist in the second part was pretty amusing... just picture KISS after a show going for the soap. You said alot about the characters in the band and how they interact in such a short space of time.. it was worked in well. |
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| A great play on words, Costa, and very funny. Hilarious to think of rock stars acting like that offstage. A brilliant twist. Well done. |
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| oh wow - it's a party of commentaries over here! No wonder though; the story you've written was a bloody good laugh! Ash |
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