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Promking007
Mark Andrew Bogdania
United States, IL, Chicago

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Ice

Are you there?

Your voice timorously trembles
snapping stony silence
in staccatoed rose-pipe bursts.

The manic monkeyz howl
in cellularized space with each lie.
Shardz of truth
betray your weary wordz.

Your run for morning paperz
promised endocrinic rapture
yet ceded certain crash.

Now you call in hazy waste
as your wordz drift 'long
tweeked towers of
panicked paranoia.

Rehab vows void
as monkeyz claw the door.

Your voice stutters silent
as your soul slips
into frenzied freeze.

I close the shell
and curse the cold.

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-07-17 02:13
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Great. Well done. Best wishes.
Martina Comment by: Martina - 2007-10-05 17:49
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dark but beautiful
sassinmarie Comment by: sassinmarie - 2007-08-15 16:11
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I think the very first line says a lot "Are you There?Lie's and false truths leave nothing but an empty shell of a human, so "Are you there" says it all.I like this one.
JansEcho Comment by: JansEcho - 2007-08-14 17:57
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How lonely :/ Liking your writings:)
Valerie Comment by: Valerie - 2007-08-14 10:22
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An interesting way of writing - monkeyz, shardz, wordz, paperz. I would have never thought to do this. Nice alliterative music going on here. Thoroughly enjoyed.
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