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theother
Gold Myne
United States, CA

Words: 56
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Two Weeks
I'll Never Make It
Fear of flight
Premonitions
Engines Dropping
Donnie Darkko

I Made It
I'll Never Make It

Slum Hotel
One Night Alone
I Got The Tickets

Convention
Strip Club
Taxi
Blow
Martinis

Two Weeks
I'll Never Make It

Next Day
Blow
New Hotel
My Friend
13 Days
I made it

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Harmonica Comment by: Harmonica - 2008-01-25 08:59
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very good. a paranoid stream of thought. like your style, disjointed yet linear (similar to my style if you don't mind me saying) - keep writing!
leoline28 Comment by: leoline28 - 2007-06-01 16:59
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Dark. Gives a friendly little maisma that hovers on your heart. Kudos
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