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Shadow Puppets All Around
Deathly Golden And Un-New
Forget Me Forget Me
My Dreams Are Dreams Of You
Deathly Golden And Un-New
The Flies Find My Lovely
My Dreams Are Dreams Of You
Burning Fires All Gone Out
The Flies Find My Lovely
She Waits In Water Blue
Burning Fires All Gone Out
Forgive Me Forgive Me
She Waits In Water Blue
Forget Me Forget Me
Forgive Me Forgive Me
Shadow Puppets All Around
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Is this a villanelle? It's either that or a terzanelle, I think. Nice use of form. I'm curious as to why you've got all of the words starting with caps. If they all have equal merit in the verse,
This was clever...I like how you said "burning fires all gone out" then "she waits in water blue....I like the imagery in this poem and the use of color too adds to the umph,..golden blue, and the fire is obviously red. Great write.
