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zepol
Hector Lopez
United States, Texas, In San Antonio former New Yorker

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4 About Eve

Before reading this piece you should first read, "About Adam" then after you read this one read, "Adam and Eve (A New Beginning), They are short reads. Enjoy

Eve Lied.
There was no serpent.
They both knew that.

Fifteen minutes later god came to visit.
'Where is Eve?'�
'I have not seen her all day.'�

Adam stood before god.
He had a bloody rock in his hand.
'I see'�, god said.

'I knew this would happen.'�
'She was a bitch.'�
Adam whispered, 'A Huh.'�

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zepol Comment by: zepol - 2007-06-04 13:39
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I am not angry with women. I wrote one about adam. Take a look.
sudipal Comment by: sudipal - 2007-06-04 13:03
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Hahaha. What woman pissed you off?

Strictly from a poetical standpoint: well written, good twist on a familiar biblical allusion, humorous
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