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colindardis
Colin Dardis
United Kingdom, Country Antrim, Belfast

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None of your f**king poems are going to save us

By now, we are used to the mourning.

Television screens broadcast funerals to the nation,
so that while we are divided in life,
we can be united by death.

We hold a minute's silence
and believe that it is enough
for steady reflection on tragic events.
After sixty seconds, we get on with our lives,
comfortable in the knowledge
that we care, and have given witness to
our concerns.

We write poetry for the fallen, the missing, the scarred,
elegies of such noble beauty, capable of graceful evocation
of another's pain, another's maddening, unanswerable torture,
with the belief that their hell can be strapped down and lashed
with the limpid tongues of words and expression.

We petition online as a whimsy,
and forward e-mails about the daily news
so that we can do our bit for the war effort,
for the manhunt, for the grief of another nation.
We feel the need to show that we care.
That we are not heartless in the face of despair.
Our blood holds traces of empathy.

We wear ribbons to support a cause
and say 'I do my bit for charity,
I've dropped a penny in the rattle tin,
so behold my lapel and know
that you have my support'.

But none of your fucking poems are going to find Madeleine McCann.
None of your countless blog banners will help free Alan Johnston.
None of your twisted ribbons will bring back the Virginia Tech Dead.

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nickvanick Comment by: nickvanick - 2007-12-04 12:50
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You have to commend the ruse of the "day of silence" or "day of solidarity". It is outwardly a reprieve from the usual self-serving flaunt, a benign excercise in futility, when in actuality it's steeped in the same ostentatious martydom as televangelism.
colindardis Comment by: colindardis - 2007-07-07 08:16
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Thanks everyone that has replied. I am happy to say that Alan Johnston has now been freed, and has returned home. I might need to amend this now...
:-)
SusanCulver Comment by: SusanCulver - 2007-07-06 15:55
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"But none of your fucking poems are going to find Madeleine McCann.
None of your countless blog banners will help free Alan Johnston.
None of your twisted ribbons will bring back the Virginia Tech Dead."

Wow. Brutal and brilliant. Love this one, Colin.
TheFailedProject Comment by: TheFailedProject - 2007-06-23 00:44
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Refreshing. I'll keep it simple :)
jonny Comment by: jonny - 2007-06-17 22:28
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Nice piece on apathy. Nice work keeping it an organised rant, strait forward and easy to follow. You have a bit to say and you say it. Being from the U.S., I've had a lot of first hand experience with it. When the Columbine shootings happened, all people did was light some candles, blame a German metal band, and move on to the next big cause for a bumper sticker to sport while driving to Wal Mart to buy shit. People need to get some priorities, period, before they even begin to get them strait. As John Prine said,"Your American flag bumper sticker won't get you into heavan anymore."
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