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Boonrassi
Timothy Briggs
United States, fl, ft lauderdale

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Lunch At Penzima's

The dunes of the Sahara cast sand across the white, sun-blasted streets of Bamako, Mali.

A liquid shadow slid along under Ambassador Jacquie Rollison's limousine.

"Right-- fuck him and his mother." She snapped the cell phone shut.

The dark windows of the car mirrored fleshy hogs crossing the road. Sun struck the dark forehead of a corpse on the sidewalk.

She picked up her iPhone; her fingertip tapped the thin tablet.

Her swiss bank account blinked on the screen. Six hundred thirty thousand dollars. "I'll be god-fucked." Only seventeen percent growth the past quarter.

"Shit." When was the economy going to come back? A gas bubble rose in her chest. She pushed a button on the armrest, the chauffeur heard a chime.

"Adla, stop at Penzima's please, I'm dying for some frog's legs."

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symonnetorpy Comment by: symonnetorpy - 2008-04-27 21:16
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loved this! you've got a penchant for iphones and swiss bank accounts - ha -i like it.
Thula7 Comment by: Thula7 - 2008-03-27 20:44
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Very nice contrast between the crude and the spoiled. You use very vivid descriptions in your works. I like it.

Thanks for the read.
Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2008-03-25 03:44
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My favorite so far I think
Tightly wrought
Succinct
Visually a buffet as usual
'God-fucked' - fantastic!
Grotesque and magnificent.
You rock Mr Boon
sarra Comment by: sarra - 2007-11-11 22:59
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I enjoyed this read. I think it could almost be expanded on and made into a short story. She's obviously a spoiled brat - and if the sight of a corpse didn't bother her, I'm wondering if somehow she caused a death to get that kind of money... interesting thoughts you've given me.
LadyMoon Comment by: LadyMoon Online- 2007-08-10 13:02
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The opening line is brilliant!!!
Like a black hole, it sucked me in.

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