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Kuntster
Nessa Rahbar
United States, TX, San Marcos

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The Following Morning, Followed by an Excuse to be Inappropriate, Yet Amazing.

Encryptions, exasperations, and deleted scenes.
A child with a loaded water gun?
It is customary for a young lady to accept a drink as a token of friendship.
Certainly fills a void,
exuberantly with a warm tongue, possibly flustered.
Could there be another ingredient in this toasty toast?
At this point in time there's no turning back,
just go along and maintain your coyness.
Meet, greet, repeat.
Experiencing exhaustion, I tip-toe gather myself and find my way.
Of course, followed by an exclamation mark.


(There's more to this piece but Im still rearranging and adding and cutting and smiling. Sometimes I hate being female. Seriously.)

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Timmythethird Comment by: Timmythethird - 2007-07-21 16:18
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I'm sorry but the imagery in this is excellent, yet taking me to a kitchen, a piece of toast, and a desert with a coyote.
JohnnySodoff Comment by: JohnnySodoff - 2007-07-11 11:43
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Where's the rest?!?! Actually, it works as it is though, so pretty cool. I like the "followed by an exclamation mark," part.

I'd like to buy you a drink sometime.
GrkGrl Comment by: GrkGrl - 2007-06-06 20:00
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Ooooh i don't know, i kinda like you all girly like...and 'bout damn time you post something new...more please!
Gothica Comment by: Gothica - 2007-06-06 15:54
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I'm going to keep an eye on how this develops. It intrigues me as something that might reveal the inner mysteries of the female psyche.
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