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Sophia
Sophia Argyris
United Kingdom, london

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Looking North

Truth. I've held it now and then; fragile,
easily warped or lost, shattered to brittle
fragments and scattered. My hands
empty once again, only skin left to touch
with skin, to remind myself of reality; sharpened
clarity can catch a moment; affirmation of
existence, breath sweeping in, enlarging;
leaving in a swoop, always returning.

Even in this bloated city, dirt and
colours harsh to the point of cruelty,
I conjure up the beach embodying purity;
ocean hushing the sky, now muted and sinking,
air peaked with a touch of coldness
to keep me from flying too far to the distance.
A wish lulled by the water, longing no longer.
Standstill, sand, no desire, truth in hand,
I aim my voice to the horizon.

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DavidJ Comment by: DavidJ - 2008-02-13 12:15
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Wow, excellent imagery. "bloated" especially.

I think maybe "my voice over the horizon" might sound better. Adds a little more vision.
ac7904 Comment by: ac7904 - 2007-12-29 08:03
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So truth, ever ellusive, is tied somehow with suffering and the need to look out of one's situation to find hope. I really like the disembodied feel of hand touching hand, like a "pair of claws scuttling across the floors of silent seas".
aprilmayed Comment by: aprilmayed - 2007-11-08 09:23
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I really enjoyed the alliteration that ran throughout this poem. "Longing no longer"...there is something so melancholy about the way that sounds, even if the meaning of the words is attempting to convey the ending to that emotion. I would love to read more of your work!
drgnflygrl Comment by: drgnflygrl - 2007-07-25 14:58
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"I aim my voice at the horizon" The perfect ending. This poem is unarming but calming at the same time. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.
SusanCulver Comment by: SusanCulver - 2007-07-22 19:11
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Beautiful stuff here. Love the imagery of this:

"breath sweeping in, enlarging;
leaving in a swoop, always returning."

and this:

"Even in this bloated city, dirt and
colours harsh to the point of cruelty,"

Very soft, very nice ending.
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