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milner place
Milner Place
United Kingdom, West Yorkshire, Huddersfield

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If I'm a poet

I'm an old fashioned
one.

There are wrinkles
around my eyes.
My hands
are sharp veined,
beard gristled,
hair
on the grey.

My head
is full of dolphins,
snakes,
horses in moonlight.
The scent of brine
lingers
in dark forests.
Curlews fly
into the cave of bats
where lavender
may permeate.

There are schooners
under full sail
in the Mojave,
condors over the streets
of New York.

Music blows
from the mouths
of salamanders,
turbot swim
in the mines of Messina,
an eagle
smells of honeysuckle.

I see weevils,
bright white,
in carcases of lyre birds

I'm sure old fashioned.

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OilsandSyntax Comment by: OilsandSyntax - 2007-11-26 20:24
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I came back to revisit this one, and I love the "schooners under full sail in the Mohave"...it paints such an inspiring picture of imagination.
Johndeprey Comment by: Johndeprey - 2007-11-20 00:48
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I'm working my way through your submitted work. I like that the poems seem to come from a particular locality they you have the flavour of, know it inside out (they say great writers stay local, like Dickens and RK Narayan). I also like how visual they are. You make new things happen by putting two images together in the same way that Theloneus Monk makes impossible notes through dischords, getting wonderful new colours out of a piano.
Nightingale Comment by: Nightingale - 2007-07-24 08:32
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As I'm old fashioned too in some way ; ) I really appreciated your poem,so surreal and full of beautiful images(oh those horses in moonlight!!)
milner place Comment by: milner place - 2007-06-23 02:47
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Thanks, Nikki. I try.

milner
OilsandSyntax Comment by: OilsandSyntax - 2007-06-22 19:25
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Your imagery is inventive.
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