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chandiraj
Chandiraj Dahal
Nepal, jhapa, haldibari

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A peg of life

If sorrows could be swept away
By tears
They could flow easily
Like melting ice

I've sorrows to be melted.

I'm in illusion
For they suggest me
What I oppose .

Can wounds be digested in ?
Can sorrows be drunk a peg ?
I can't believe .
Joys follow sorrows,
Sorrows follow life ,

At times I realize
That's the way, we survive .

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prolificsantu Comment by: prolificsantu - 2008-05-19 20:13
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this is an average piece i must admit..it could be made rather impressive..anyway effective for the younger guy like you.
FENELLA Comment by: FENELLA - 2007-11-18 22:25
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I LOVE THAT PEG OF LIFE! CHANDIRAJ, ARE YOU LONELY..IS THAT YOUR DRIVING FORCE IN WRITING?
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