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chandiraj
Chandiraj Dahal
Nepal, jhapa, haldibari

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I'm Hot

Katmandu is hot
I'm hotter
like puerile café's
regular hosts

I'm one of them .

I usually hate cigar
except in the dusk
And in the dawn

Accompanying my pals
sometimes they accompany me

I hate sucking it
but it pleases me
puffing myself In.

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prolificsantu Comment by: prolificsantu - 2008-05-19 20:00
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oh bitch, i did not realize you could write as good piece as this...it please me to see you puff in...crap good...
I hate sucking it
but it pleases me
puffing myself In.
great mr crazy!
Loloix Comment by: Loloix - 2007-12-10 04:11
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oh.. it reminds me of my place..
abhinaw Comment by: abhinaw - 2007-11-26 02:25
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BravO! admitted life frankly like cigaratte...So it is! and love it in dawn and dusk?
abhinaw Comment by: abhinaw - 2007-11-26 02:25
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BravO! admitted life frankly like cigaratte...So it is! and love it in dawn and dusk?
Comment by: - 2007-09-27 15:04
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quite unique piece of work....Thanks for ur comment, and i should be adding some new ones soon. keep writing
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