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xemoxangelx
Emily Barker
United Kingdom, Essex

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My Window

Rainbow colours pass my window
Stars fall from darkened sky
Twinkle past my favourite window
Remind me of younger times.

The full moon shines above my window
The moon man smiles down at me
Looks through my little window
Laughs at the dancing flea.

Lemon cakes and strawberry jam
Teamed with expensive ham
A tea party for my friends
This night I wish will never end.

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papercupofglory Comment by: papercupofglory - 2007-09-29 10:02
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This is good. I feel dumb for writing something like "Composition" now. It makes me happy, your poem, not my feeling dumb.
dartdisah Comment by: dartdisah - 2007-07-09 20:59
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that was good. simple and complete.
Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-07-06 10:34
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Nice little poem. It made me smile to good work

Anne
YeOldeFart Comment by: YeOldeFart - 2007-07-03 18:26
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There's an Alice in Wonderland quality to this charming little piece. I love the fantasy. Well done Lass.
rrig16 Comment by: rrig16 - 2007-07-02 18:28
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Nice, you made me smile...not an easy task

-R
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