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xemoxangelx
Emily Barker
United Kingdom, Essex

Words: 118
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Comments: 6

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a vampire story

Invisible hands reach for me from within the shadows, the hands of unimaginable monsters too horrific for even the darkest imagination. Their putrid hands brush my skin causing me to vomit. I cannot move I am immobilised by an iron grip, slipping out of consciousness as the monster sucks blood from my veins draining the life from me.

I awoke startled. I kept dreaming of those nights, those nights when so much pain had befallen my loved ones. My own curiosity had caused the death of my family. 'You can not live until you have known true suffering' his words had haunted me since that night. I was doomed to live for eternity knowing what I had done.

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alecthegreat Comment by: alecthegreat - 2007-09-24 05:44
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Great descriptions and great use of language. In all, this is fairly well written. I kinda wish it were a bit longer, but other than that, good stuff.
Comment by: - 2007-08-11 14:49
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A very dark tale. Extremly powerfull and gripping.
SamMc Comment by: SamMc - 2007-06-30 07:20
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I liked it. Very nice, drew me. =] keep up the good work.
rmhamilton Comment by: rmhamilton - 2007-06-23 16:32
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I enjoyed this a lot
I agree that it feels like an introduction for more to come...
anastar Comment by: anastar - 2007-06-13 14:56
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wow..very deep and gothic...i loved it...it felt like an introduction to a longer story..but that could be my hopeful imagination that craves for more ^.^
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