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robert77
robert samson
Peru, lima

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testing editred

1,2,3. I'm testing EditRed
such a joy
I have no clue
how to start

Innocense flows
English not my natural language

I can try
to pick the lotus
from my garden
to yours

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Valerie Comment by: Valerie - 2007-06-10 17:16
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Very nice start here with poem numeral uno. I like the form, and seeing that this is not your native language, I am impressed that there is not one misspelled word, and no punctuation, which is an asset. You are off to an excellent beginning. Welcome aboard.
RJWilliams Comment by: RJWilliams - 2007-06-10 15:11
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Lotus picking it is then. Looking forward to reading some of your work.
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