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HorrorWriter41
James Starnes
United States, NY, Binghamton

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I Raged

I awoke in the morning,
And raged at my life.
It didn't listen,
As it twisted the knife.
I sat in loneliness,
And I raged at the pain.
It bled me dry,
Until nothing could remain.
I laid in my bed,
And raged at the night.
I could not sleep,
No dreams would take flight.
I raged at my soul,
So hollow and empty.
And I knew right then,
There was nothing left of me.

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2007-12-31 01:52
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Well done, you are expert on rhyming! You have an very attractive style! Would you please share it with others? Best wishes.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2007-12-05 05:17
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your poem has put me in deep thought! I am thinking of the valuable things you have taught! Great done!
Lilymaid1 Comment by: Lilymaid1 - 2007-07-20 12:26
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You surely embodied universal rage with these words.
We all feel like this at times.
Don't give in, write your way right back out of this emotion,
as you so always do. Such beauty in emptying oneself and to be able to share it without fear.
Dominika14 Comment by: Dominika14 - 2007-06-19 18:59
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Aw. Wow, I wish I could write something like this. I love how you kept the theme of raging but at the same time brought so much imagery into it.
Obsessedwriter Comment by: Obsessedwriter - 2007-06-13 17:58
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Realism of the common man. Your story is everyone's story. Thanks for making me feel that the frustrations in my life are not exclusive to me.
Nice work.
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