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Lance W Toohey
Lance Toohey
Australia, Queensland, Cairns

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SHE DANCES IN DREAMS

my inspiration

She dances in dreams
Surreal, beguiled,
As a firefly weaves
'Pon zephyr's wave,
Tranced by this vision
In reflective reverie,
I'm lost to this magic
Enchanted, a slave.
Within her depth
I bathe my soul,
Awash with warmth
Of love divine.
Within her soul
I feel such depth,
Enwrapped within
This heart of mine.
Engulfed in this aura
This rapturous bliss,
Caught 'pon a wave
Of passion's desire,
I surrender my being
My body and soul,
Tho' she dances in dreams
Her kiss lifts me higher.

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ymh99 Comment by: ymh99 - 2007-07-15 12:37
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Lance, this is so incredibly expressive. I am impressed. This is excellent writing. Thank you for sharing. A+!
carriedale Comment by: carriedale - 2007-06-29 13:47
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Within her soul
I feel such depth,
Enwrapped within
This heart of mine.

My Favorite part. Another nice read, thanks for sharing. I can't find anything to change or edit. Written very well.
2runaway Comment by: 2runaway - 2007-06-17 10:29
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I don't really have anything to suggest, just wanted to let you know I enjoyed this very much
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