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Lance W Toohey
Lance Toohey
Australia, Queensland, Cairns

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LETS GET SERIOUS

The foolish seek perfection
As the clown betrays his smile,
Idealists scoff reality
While the tallyman thrives on guile,
The pious puke dull platitudes
And the athiest smiles denial,
Have you ever wondered, maybe;
Creation could be on trial?

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Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-07-05 06:38
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another great write very powerful in very few words.

Excellent

Anne
Scribe Comment by: Scribe - 2007-07-02 11:10
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Wow! This is great work. Powerful and thought-provoking and in short order. Well done.
carriedale Comment by: carriedale - 2007-06-29 13:45
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I really liked this one. Nice rhythm , put together well, easy to read and understand,a lot of meaning w/o being long -winded.
Susan Cook-Jahme Comment by: Susan Cook-Jahme - 2007-06-28 00:41
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Hi Lance,
And so I write in answer
To your honesty & guile,
Creation as I know it
Has been around some while!
LOL!
Susan
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