Hesitantly Making Eye Contact While You Find Yourself Inside.
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Hesitantly Making Eye Contact While You Find Yourself Inside.
Hesitantly Making Eye Contact While You Find Yourself Inside.
You're an inspiration to a child.
Moaning, complaining, reinventing--
Pulling out your childhood, facades dissolving into one -- still lives.
This isn't about fucking. This isn't even about romance--
Carrying you, in me, like a child carries a stuffed bear-- covered in apple sauce.
Warmer than a cup of milk before bed.
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I like the metaphor here. Especially the last line.
Reminds me of an old girlfriend who after sex used to walk around saying "drip, drip, drip." |
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| i like it alot. |
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| Goddamn, this isn't about pregnancy. And no, I am not pregnant. |
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| preggo time? |
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Comment by: roy - 2007-06-15 07:22
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| are you pregnant, Klunki? |
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