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LucyB
Lucy Burrow
United Kingdom, Devon, Holsworthy

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Jacky Frost

When Summers blue sky fades to grey
And swiftly ends the shortening day
When coldness takes the flowers away
Ill dance the dance of winter

Over hedges see me trip
To frost the leaf and haw and hip
To petrify each sparkling drip
And dance the dance of winter

Ill fade the roses red to white
Redress the landscape in one night
Make the cobwebs crisp and white
And herald in the winter

I'll tiptoe over lawns and trees
The water pipe I soon shall freeze
Ill bring transport to its knees
And turn all things to winter

In leafy Hollows, see me hide
I herald in the Christmas tide
Where man keeps snug by fires inside
While outside, I am winter.

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Comment by: - 2006-05-08 11:54
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Though not much of a fan of cold winters, I found myself thinking of the season in pleasant terms.
kissykissy24 Comment by: kissykissy24 - 2006-04-02 07:15
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i love the imagery and the rhyme scheme. the repetition of "winter" also works well. great job- flows well too
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-03-17 09:12
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Very modern poem with a classic meter. You adapted the two together nicely!
Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2006-01-25 06:24
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This was very nicely written. Great subject for today since I am looking out my patio door at the snow covered roses. I also noticed on your bio about your family history. One of my ancestors is Charles Dickens. I was heavy into family research for about 6 years. I haven't worked much on it lately.
My favorite part. Iā??ll tiptoe over lawns and trees
The water pipe I soon shall freeze
Ill bring transport to its knees
And turn all things to winter
denisedee Comment by: denisedee - 2006-01-25 05:42
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'Ill bring transport to its knees
And turn all things to winter'

love that line.
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