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Comment by: - 2006-05-08 11:54
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| Though not much of a fan of cold winters, I found myself thinking of the season in pleasant terms. |
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| i love the imagery and the rhyme scheme. the repetition of "winter" also works well. great job- flows well too |
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| Very modern poem with a classic meter. You adapted the two together nicely! |
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Comment by: Cherley - 2006-01-25 06:24
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This was very nicely written. Great subject for today since I am looking out my patio door at the snow covered roses. I also noticed on your bio about your family history. One of my ancestors is Charles Dickens. I was heavy into family research for about 6 years. I haven't worked much on it lately.
My favorite part. Iā??ll tiptoe over lawns and trees
The water pipe I soon shall freeze
Ill bring transport to its knees
And turn all things to winter |
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'Ill bring transport to its knees
And turn all things to winter'
love that line. |
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