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4thtroika
Duanne Walton
United States, Illinois, Morris

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Exorcism

If I put you on paper
Will you leave me alone?
I'll put you on display
You'll haunt me no more

You'd find someone new
From among the endless mass
Somebody else would yield
To their mind you'd attach

You could feast on their fear
As you've done with mine
Fly in the face of reason
Skeletal fingers pick minds

Go commit your mental rapes
Yet I'd like to know
If they put you on paper
Will you leave them alone?

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JezzyWolf Comment by: JezzyWolf - 2007-06-19 04:47
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That's very original. Maybe it's just me, but I think that concept would make a great story.

I love your four line stanzas. Makes everything flow together quite easily, and nothing feels forced in. You got talent, my friend! ~Jezzy
Comment by: - 2007-06-19 02:43
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Give it a try...write it down...

Ya never ever know, if ya never ever go..
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